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Post by Lekhrite on Jul 31, 2012 11:30:19 GMT -5
Kiba trotted out of the woods, just coming back in to the camp from a walk in the woods. She trotted over to the prey pile in the middle of the camp, and dragged a deer fawn from the pile. She then lay down on the soil covered ground to eat it, and thought We are so lucky to have this territory, it's so beautiful.She felt the bright sun warming her back, and sniffed the air. It smelled so different every time, sometimes of foxes or badgers, a made scent, and sometimes of trees and soil. There were always so many scents in the air, it was hard to keep track of them. But today, there is only the scent of the earth and the sky, and everything is perfect. She looked around at the other wolves of the Cs'Ranthum pack, her friends, her family, her life. Yes, today really is perfect. She thought. Then, when she was half done with the fawn, she looked around for company.
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Post by killeremerald201 on Jul 31, 2012 11:41:25 GMT -5
Walks out of den carrying some jewelry i had just finished and i save one just for the fun of it and then give the rest to the wolves that ordered them when i'm finally done i go over to the kill pile and pick out a small hare thinking the fawn should be saved for the alpha or the to be mothers
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Post by killeremerald201 on Jul 31, 2012 11:45:02 GMT -5
Sees the Beta female and says Hi
PLEASE MAKE YOUR POSTS A LITTLE LONGER!
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Post by Lekhrite on Jul 31, 2012 12:01:46 GMT -5
Kiba looked around, and moments later spotted the brown and purple she-wolf standing a few feet away from her. "Hi!" She said. "Do you want to share the rest of this fawn with me?" She asked.
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Post by killeremerald201 on Jul 31, 2012 12:17:38 GMT -5
Lavender Smiled at Beta and said " sure" and layed down by her and started to eat some of the fawn and then looked at the beta and said " yummy did you catch this all by your self? It's Really good" and ate some more of it, ears turned toward Beta so she could still hear her. Also, please write in third person, for instance "Lavender trotted over to Kiba, and sat down. "Hi," she said." INSTEAD OF "I walk over to Kiba, and sat down, and said "hi." I have corrected it for you in this post, but that is a very strict rule. It's excused because you are new to the site.  |
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Post by Lekhrite on Jul 31, 2012 12:29:34 GMT -5
"No, I just got it from the pile" said Kiba, "But yeah, it's really good. The best I've had in a while." She said. She thought about how everything seemed to be going perfectly that day. She also thought about how someday she wanted to have pups. She didn't know quite how that thought had come across her, but thought about it anyway.
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